JANUBABY said:Wo larki thi ik nazuk si
Jo baat baat pay hasti thi
Jis ki gehri ankoon main,
Umedoon ki masti thi
Jis kay khoab sunehray thay
Aur khoaboon ki aik basti thi.
Jis kay hath ki kali choori,
Chan chan kar k bajti thi
Dehteez pay jis kay nazuk dil pay,
Pyar ki shamma jalti thi
Phir yuu hoa, ik andhi aee
Khoaboon ki basti ujar gai,
Umedain sab tood gai,
Choori ki chan chan maand hoi,
Hansi laboon say rooth gai
Ab us ki sookhi ankhoon main,
Dard ki nadiya behti thi.
Wo to ik masoom kali thi,
Wo to bas tanha he bhali thi
Jhootay sachay khooab dikha kar
Wo phir kiyu ab lot gaya.
DeMoraliZe7 said:thanks for all of ur nice response of all, here really i like it, yeah , u have gave nice response all here , mostly i am getting bore in different forms of internet, but here i like ur styles, especially thanks to dill ki rani for nice replying
Thnx DeMora
aur JB ko bilkul apni Family samjhna coz yaha pe kafy
ache membrz hai
kabhi ap ko upset nahi kare ge
Take cre..
ZEESHANAHMED said:
DiL Ki RaNi 2 said:DEmoralize yaar u r rite coz mere saath bhi
yahi hota hai
mera bhi koi frnd nahi hai
khair ab kya kiya ja sakta hai coz yeh dunya hai
aur yaha sab kuch hota hai
Do'nt worry, hum hain na!
Doctor Sam said:Rani, nice peom by Amjad Islam Amjad...
SALL said:
DiL Ki RaNi 2 said:aur SAlly ap mujhe bhol gi hai
mera nick kya ho ga
areyy yar,, meri abhi aap se zyada baat hui nahi na,,,
aur jaane bager nick nahi rakhte k koi mind na kar jae
hmm,,,,,,
wot abt
dil ki rani --> DR
